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Hindostan Falls

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Thick beads of water cling chill
to skin, slide into cloth to trickle,
dauntless, down the inverted hill
of the small of our backs. As a child
I believed that all rivers were blue--
you, though, are dark, a mix of mud,
foam, and compost rot that a few
find beautiful.  You are swollen with fall
rain and stories of disease, death, decay.



Your cascading mists falsify my father
and my friend who stand but feet away.
A decrepit yellow sign proudly enumerates
your massacre of those villagers who trusted
you to give them life water and raise them
to old age.  Through all those rusted words
I read how, instead, your incessant waters
bred mosquitoes that spread yellow fever
that killed a town.  Those victims



did not see you as I do -- they never
saw destructive maelstroms in your
lazy whirlpools, never saw saliva-dripping,
jagged teeth hungering for death
in your waterfall, nipping
at the shores of silt and pulling
all who look upon you down.
But I watch your sanguine trees
dropping their corpse-blood colored leaves.
In class, we were to technically write an ode to something or other. One of the suggestions was a place we really liked as a child.

I thought of Hindostan Falls, a waterfall near my hometown. Look it up on Google--it's quite beautiful. But anyway, I was thinking about it, and I started thinking about my first visit there with my Dad and my best friend at the time Lynzee, and I'd just started learning to read, and next to where we were standing was a sign that talked about how the whole town of Hindostan that relied on the river died out.

So then I thought, hey, might as well write an ode to Hindostan that shows it in the correct light! Only now it's not really an ode. So. Uh.

...I'm done rambling.

Here's the wikipedia page about Hindostan: [link]
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TheCrimsonEyedGirl's avatar
This is an absolutely lovely poem (ode). I especially like the ending:

"But I watch your sanguine trees
dropping their corpse-blood covered leaves."

It's quite beautiful; a wonderful use of wording and great description.

You did the beauty of the waterfall justice. :+favlove: